Wednesday, October 8, 2014
The Zoo
Hi,
I'm writing a story, and I would like to share it with you… I call it The Zoo! (I will be posting regularly on this subject.) Well here's my first chapter:
Ch.1 the hole
It all started with a simple mistake. I was walking home from school when suddenly "Oof!", I fell in a hole. I looked up hoping it was only a hole dug in the dirt road I trot by a dog, but I was disappointed and also quite surprised to find it was ten feet deep!
Suddenly a bell rung so loud the bravest viking would have screamed like a little girl, I heard a howl and a sound I would never forget: "OOOOOOOWWWWWWWWLLLLLLLLGGGGGGGGGOOOOOOOOOO!". I forgot I was in North Idaho, I thought I was in the deepest jungle of Africa being hunted!
Hope you liked the first chapter of my story, pleas comment below.
p.s. This story is completely fiction.
-Julia Kime
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