Sunday, October 19, 2014
here's the second chapter of my story: The Zoo! I quickly hid in the shadows of the dark cave so not to be seen by this "monster" I heard. I heard footsteps getting closer and closer, faster and faster, And then as my life flashed through my mind I heard a scream as if in pity of something. Then I heard this thing run away. "What could that be?" I asked my self, as a sound of burlap or maybe a thick rope of twine being unraveled met my ears. I saw something drop in the cave, but it did not look like a monster it looked more like a rope! was someone trying to save me from a vicious monster? Then a quire sight met my eyes, it was an elderly man climbing down the rope! I crawled out of the shadows to meet this man, he walked over to me, helped me up, and in a jolly voice greeted me with a "Howdy!". "Um, hi…" I said in a shy way. "What are you doing here?" I asked, and after that I was told a story that could never be proved, or could it?
Wednesday, October 8, 2014
Hi, I'm writing a story, and I would like to share it with you… I call it The Zoo! (I will be posting regularly on this subject.) Well here's my first chapter: Ch.1 the hole It all started with a simple mistake. I was walking home from school when suddenly "Oof!", I fell in a hole. I looked up hoping it was only a hole dug in the dirt road I trot by a dog, but I was disappointed and also quite surprised to find it was ten feet deep! Suddenly a bell rung so loud the bravest viking would have screamed like a little girl, I heard a howl and a sound I would never forget: "OOOOOOOWWWWWWWWLLLLLLLLGGGGGGGGGOOOOOOOOOO!". I forgot I was in North Idaho, I thought I was in the deepest jungle of Africa being hunted! Hope you liked the first chapter of my story, pleas comment below. p.s. This story is completely fiction. -Julia Kime